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I'm a relative newbie to the boards, but I've been checking them out daily for the last Month. I'd like to enlist the help of some of the very learned and experienced members of Army.ca.
This is the news article that got me started:
http://www.canada.com/topics/news/politics/story.html?id=69a30adb-9d09-41da-a518-37fce61cc1db&k=80666
In short, Airbus and The Official Opposition are decrying the sole source selection of a new Heavy Lifter for the Air Force. Although Ujjal Dosanjh has no authority on this issue, his comments stuck in my craw. I've prepared an email to send to his constituency office, and I've inserted it below. I'd like some feedback from other members of the forum before sending it. I've checked my facts, and they seem in order, but the effect of any such letter is lessened by mistakes and emotional haranguing. Please review and comment.
Please note--I'm not looking for criticism such as "Geeeez... are you ever one stupid git!..." so much as on content, punctuation, facts etc.
Many thanks.
Msg follows:
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Ujjal Dosanjh M.P.
House of Commons
Ottawa, ON
Sir,
Re: Acquisition of New Cargo Aircraft for the CAF
With regard to the subject noted above, my credentials are limited, but valid. I am a retired member of the Canadian Forces (Reserve), and My father was an aero engine technician in the RCAF, (he retired in 1966).
A news article published today by Canwest News Services reports that the Defence Critic for the Official Opposition said "a contract should not be issued to Boeing for new C-17 aircraft without competition". It specifically quotes you as saying 'Competition is very important, it is in fact the key and a fair and open competition always provides better value for taxpayers." The remainder of the article suggests the Airbus A400 should be seriously considered as an alternate to the Boeing Aircraft.
My research indicates the following:
a) The C-17 first went into service with the USAF in 1995. It is now used by Britain, and has been ordered by Australia;
b) The prototype A400 will not fly until 2007;
c) Richard Thompson, senior vice-president for Airbus Military, has pledged 16 - A400s to Canada by the year 2014; and
d) The Canadian Forces has committed to an extended tour in Afghanistan, lasting until 2009.
The C-17 is a proven, reliable aircraft. Reports from both the USAF and the RAF have been excellent. Meanwhile the A400 has been plagued by delays, and Airbus cannot deliver aircraft to the Canadian Forces for another 8 years.
Issues such as spin-offs, economic benefits, and "fair competition" cloud the fact that Canada needs these transports now. Previous governments have ignored the aging C-130 Hercules fleet, and it is far past time they were replaced. My father worked on some of the "Hercs" now in service, and you may have noticed that he retired forty years ago. I am persuaded sir, that your priority--as an elected representative of Canada--must be the Canadian soldiers on the ground in Afghanistan, and the CAF airmen who take care of their airlift needs.
Time is of the essence, and we must move forward now to solve Canada's tactical and strategic military airlift needs. The Airbus A400 is not a proven vehicle and will take many years to deliver. Airbus cannot meet the needs of the Canadian Forces, Boeing can.
Can you assure me Sir, that the Liberal party is prepared to support the immediate acquisition of new cargo aircraft, recognizing that the issue is critical to the well-being of Canadian service personnel who at this moment deployed on a very dangerous and demanding mission? I would appreciate hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
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This is the news article that got me started:
http://www.canada.com/topics/news/politics/story.html?id=69a30adb-9d09-41da-a518-37fce61cc1db&k=80666
In short, Airbus and The Official Opposition are decrying the sole source selection of a new Heavy Lifter for the Air Force. Although Ujjal Dosanjh has no authority on this issue, his comments stuck in my craw. I've prepared an email to send to his constituency office, and I've inserted it below. I'd like some feedback from other members of the forum before sending it. I've checked my facts, and they seem in order, but the effect of any such letter is lessened by mistakes and emotional haranguing. Please review and comment.
Please note--I'm not looking for criticism such as "Geeeez... are you ever one stupid git!..." so much as on content, punctuation, facts etc.
Many thanks.
Msg follows:
********************************************
Ujjal Dosanjh M.P.
House of Commons
Ottawa, ON
Sir,
Re: Acquisition of New Cargo Aircraft for the CAF
With regard to the subject noted above, my credentials are limited, but valid. I am a retired member of the Canadian Forces (Reserve), and My father was an aero engine technician in the RCAF, (he retired in 1966).
A news article published today by Canwest News Services reports that the Defence Critic for the Official Opposition said "a contract should not be issued to Boeing for new C-17 aircraft without competition". It specifically quotes you as saying 'Competition is very important, it is in fact the key and a fair and open competition always provides better value for taxpayers." The remainder of the article suggests the Airbus A400 should be seriously considered as an alternate to the Boeing Aircraft.
My research indicates the following:
a) The C-17 first went into service with the USAF in 1995. It is now used by Britain, and has been ordered by Australia;
b) The prototype A400 will not fly until 2007;
c) Richard Thompson, senior vice-president for Airbus Military, has pledged 16 - A400s to Canada by the year 2014; and
d) The Canadian Forces has committed to an extended tour in Afghanistan, lasting until 2009.
The C-17 is a proven, reliable aircraft. Reports from both the USAF and the RAF have been excellent. Meanwhile the A400 has been plagued by delays, and Airbus cannot deliver aircraft to the Canadian Forces for another 8 years.
Issues such as spin-offs, economic benefits, and "fair competition" cloud the fact that Canada needs these transports now. Previous governments have ignored the aging C-130 Hercules fleet, and it is far past time they were replaced. My father worked on some of the "Hercs" now in service, and you may have noticed that he retired forty years ago. I am persuaded sir, that your priority--as an elected representative of Canada--must be the Canadian soldiers on the ground in Afghanistan, and the CAF airmen who take care of their airlift needs.
Time is of the essence, and we must move forward now to solve Canada's tactical and strategic military airlift needs. The Airbus A400 is not a proven vehicle and will take many years to deliver. Airbus cannot meet the needs of the Canadian Forces, Boeing can.
Can you assure me Sir, that the Liberal party is prepared to support the immediate acquisition of new cargo aircraft, recognizing that the issue is critical to the well-being of Canadian service personnel who at this moment deployed on a very dangerous and demanding mission? I would appreciate hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours truly,
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX